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Wednesday, October 28, 2015

SLC with my parents

Displaying IMG_1756.JPGOn Thursday the 22nd of October I had a SLC with my parents, I showed them my Writing, Spelling, My IKAN goal, Handwriting, My Seaworld summary, My WIT Booklet and My Frankie the Duck questions. I thought I did Okay considering my mum and dad were very proud of me. I probably could of described more about my work but it was fine. Next time I will try make my SLC better by adding more work into my SLC sheet

All About Me

Today I found out how to use a new Web Tool called Thinglink.  I created a google drawing first and then used this programme to add more information.  Just hover over the image to find out more.



Tuesday, October 20, 2015

The Forest

My Writing Focus Is


  • To have a plan for each piece of writing
  • To add paragraphs
  • Ti- Different Time
  • P- Place
  • To- Topic
  • P- Person Speaks

Maaka N 26 September
The Forest


Corbin, Josh and I were playing with a ball at my house, until Josh accidentally kicked the ball into the Forest that grew next to our house “Whoops, I’ll get it” Josh said politely
“Josh do not go in there!” I shouted
“Why not?” Josh Asked
“I heard the last person that went in there never came back” I shrugged
“but what about your ball didn’t it cost a lot of money” Josh said
“Yes but I get a new one” I said
“Let’s go in!” Corbin said frantically
“Fine then we can go in, But first we need some supplies if we are going to go in there”


We went inside and got supplies like torches, food, water, knives, shovels and a few backpacks. As we set off into the Forest we saw my ball and swiftly grabbed it but we didn’t want to go back we wanted to go further in and explore more of the forest.


As we walked deeper into the forest the ghostly voices we heard got louder. It started to get dark so we decided to head back home, But when we turned around we didn’t know where we came from, We were lost. “Josh I told you this was a bad idea” I said
“It’s not my fault” Josh shouted
“It kind of is Josh, you kicked it in here” Corbin shrugged
“Well I don’t have a good aim” Josh claimed
“Yes you do, in fact you’re the best in the team” Corbin said dramatically
“Yeah totally” I said sarcastically.  We looked to find the sun but the sun had already set and we were 100% lost.


We ran around to find an exit but we couldn’t find a crumb. “Maybe we should look for some shelter” Corbin said with a terrified look on his face.


We finally found a place to stay for the terrifying night ahead of us. when we woke up it was morning and we were starving because we had eaten all of our food and and our refreshments we had to look for some food. “I’m starving I need food or I’ll go rotten” corbin groaned
“No you won’t” I said.  We set off to look for a meal, we searched the perimeter but found nothing until we heard a ‘Crunch’ we all looked down there were no broken sticks or twigs under our feet, we started to worry what was in there, is it going to hurt us. We heard footsteps getting closer and closer, We instantly dived behind a tree. Once the mysterious creature came around the corner I looked around the tree and saw…

It was my mum she came to look for us I ran up to her “Mum!!” I shouted
“Maaka!! I was so worried about you boys” Mum said
“We were lost in the woods” Josh shouted
“We are so glad you’re here” Corbin said
“I am too, It took me ages to find you” Mum said. At the end of the day all was well and everyone was at home safe except for Corbin he damaged his arm in The Forest