As he started walking down he felt dizzy, the world was spinning and his vision was getting weaker and weaker until his eyes closed and he fell to the ground.
Two hours later... He finally woke up he was in a house but whose house? As he thought to himself where he could be he heard a noise as someone was coming home. He looked around and saw a slight movement the slight movement saw him look and slowly walked over the movement turned out to be a human (luckily) He said "Where am I?"
and the lady said "we saw you fall over so we took you back here to be safe
"Oh okay then. So where is my stuff?" Royce said.
"Don't worry my husband has them" the lady said.
"Okay" said Royce "I should probably be going now".
"Then just go see my husband."
So Royce went to her husband and grabbed his bag and left but he needed a ride so he walked back inside to see if he could catch a lift.
When Royce made it home he started feeling his sickness like he had on the mountain he quickly walked inside and his head felt faint and his body was limp. While he walked to his bed the pains got worse he couldn't walk so he dived into his bed and got under the covers and within a blink of a eye he was in a deep slumber.
So proud of you Maaka, your writing content has come a long way :) I am loving those descriptive words and exploring use of dialogue.
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